C.J. Mustang

I love this poem! It's so cute! I don't think you have to change anything to it, but I would love it if you expanded it. Although, you could maybe ...

I defenitely liked your story--just maybe could you put it into parts so people who want to read it don't get turned off by the length? I only saw a ...

I like your poem a lot. where it said: We jump people for fun ‘cuz that’s gangsta! Well, not really fun ‘cuz fun aint gangsta! I thought that was kind ...

I liked it, and I can't wait to see where it's going! there were only a few things I saw wrong with it, though: at the parts where it said ...

I hope you're going to write some more to that, because it kept me hooked 'til the very end. now, does this big bad doctor man like the lady doctor? ...

Hey. Just want to tell you if you didn't red the rules: you need to post 2 reviews before you submit 1 story. And also, between every paragraph, make sure ...

This was an awesome first part of the story! I have to hurry and write this so I can read the next part, but I saw a couple of funny ...

dude, you're so awesome! this totally rocked! very sad, but awesomely written! Kudos, I've got nothin but praise for ya. I would also like to say thanks for reviewing my ...

hey! I think your poem is awesome, but like others have said before, it could use some punctuation. I know some people have offered you some suggestions, but here are ...

Hey. That sounded kind of dark to me, and it was totally awesome, not that I'm a dark person or anything. I could totally picture the whole thing. Kudos. :wink:

Holy crap that made me want to cry! In a good, sad way though, not a "OMG I can't even finish this sentence I need to print it and burn ...

Hey! Awesome story! The only thing that I found that needs a little work is the transition from the hospital to the house. You could say that there was so ...